Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and examples.
It is thought by some people that governments ought to cover all students’ studying fees in educational facilities. To some extent I agree with this meaning, however there are some points I want to clarify.
To begin with, the ability to obtain education for free will significantly benefit society. Firstly, it will decrease level of poverty. Many people barely can pay for education of their children, as a result they compelled to work on two jobs, spare money for clothes and food. Free education for everyone will benefit general economic status of population. Secondly, if government pay for studying, it attracts a lot of pupils to continue the studying and replenish the number of educated specialists in the country.
However, there are some possible disadvantages in this situation. As the number of students will rise, the government will spend a significant part of budget for all students. Moreover, the government may cut the budget from other indispensable branches, such as medicine. To give a clear example, the Government of Ukraine increased a number of budget places, but stopped to sponsor 25% of medical facilities. As a result, free education displaced the part of our healthcare.
In my opinion the best decision is to allow youth to study for free, but the number of students studying without paying should be limited. This could be reached by a simple ranking system. Students need to get an entry score in order to enroll the university. Such system will incline children in school to be more concentrated and study diligently and at same time spare our money for other important needs such as healthcare.
In conclusion, the education should be free for diligent students only and this will benefit society and dispose us from other important issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10921501706 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84187850847 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563139931741 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9516173505 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246543650496 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796591152981 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623899756928 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148913463479 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678049495556 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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