Technological advancements, especially internet has a pivotal role in our life. However, some people says because of internet usage, people will think and behave identically in the near future. I also have the same view because of the reasons which is mentioned below.
To begin with, widespread use of internet helps the people to know different cultures around the globe. consequently, they have a tendency to copy attractive things from each others culture. By doing this continuously people often forget their actual culture and gradually adapt to a global culture. Another important point is, it is not a surprising news nowadays that people like to chose their life partners from different country. Due to globalization people work in distant countries and they would like to marry someone from that country regardless of the nationality and religion . Hence, their off springs never would be same like their ancestors.
Moreover, the television programs and movies are similar in almost all the countries. Hollywood and Bollywood making same kind of movies which have same stories, narration and styles. As we all know, people always have a tendency to copy styles from movies and TV shows, so they copy the acts and styles of their favourite film stars which subsequently results in growing a universal culture, since the actors are behaving and acting in a same manner. Finally, the writers from different countries spreading a same philosophy thorough their writings which can make a significant influence in people minds. Since the writers spread same ideas ,the readers world widely forced to think in a same manner.
To conclude, most of the factors around the globe have the same characteristics and so does the people mind and behaviour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, hence, however, if, moreover, so, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22261484099 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71572708067 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1240988372 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117130263928 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430231877024 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363813768672 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709488804447 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290203506881 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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