A nation can be made popular worldwide not only by an intellectuals but also by an athletic and politician. In today's world, sports and social activities are given a tantamount importance as academic activities due to several reason.
Involvement of a youth to these activities gives them a chance to get exposed in this field, which can be beneficial to themselves. for example: when a child is given a chance to take part part in certain game, he/she can be absorbed to that game from a beginning, making them a highly virtuoso players and also, give them a chance to be a national players. But, if a child is not exposed to certain game then all these opportunities are stripped from them and their life is spend doing other activities not similar to athletic career( even tho they innate skilled related to certain games).
Various international games, international conferences are held now days. In these games an athletic is needed for a better performance and also, to win a game, making a nation popular world wide due to musing performance of highly skilled players. So, to make such an skilled players a nation should focuses to make a involvement of kids towards sports and other activities during their enrollment in college and university. Furthermore, involvement in sports helps a person for physical development.
Similarly, involvement in social activities helps a individuals for interaction with many people, may helps to lead a mass in future. if an individual are having such social program since a early age, she may have an idea to deal with people, get a chance to know other people sentiment and attitude. This achievement is very essential for a emotional maturation of a person, and also be help for a child who wants a career as politician.
finally, involvement of an children to sports and social activities are very beneficial to them: for physical and emotional maturation, for development of their career. and furthermore, help to a nation so university and college should focus equally on sports and social activities as academic activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...an be made popular worldwide not only by an intellectuals but also by an athleti...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an intellectual' or simply 'intellectuals'?
Suggestion: an intellectual; intellectuals
... be made popular worldwide not only by an intellectuals but also by an athletic and politician...
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...ot only by an intellectuals but also by an athletic and politician. In todays wo...
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...mportance as academic activities due to several reason. Involvement of a youth to these act...
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... which can be beneficial to themselves. for example: when a child is given a chance...
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...so, give them a chance to be a national players. But, if a child is not exposed to cert...
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Suggestion: a
...ighly skilled players. So, to make such an skilled players a nation should focuses...
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...players a nation should focuses to make a involvement of kids towards sports and ...
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Suggestion: a
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Suggestion: an child; children
... politician. finally, involvement of an children to sports and social activities are ver...
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...ation, for development of their career. and furthermore, help to a nation so univer...
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...ties as academic activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, similarly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07225433526 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98499510832 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479768786127 0.524837075471 91% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3344150031 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.357142857 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132968096222 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608735064541 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785277611372 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099321067168 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755154949916 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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