Technology has changed human life on earth enormously, and every human being enjoys the advantages of technology each day. Because of this tremendous growth in technology some people have a opinion that , we need not follow the traditional values, which our ancestors followed. I am completely opposing this idea, with the below mentioned arguments
To begin with,survival of human life on earth based on families. A family cannot sustain unless it follows the values such as love, faith and mutual caring. In the same way, a society will not last long if it is not follow the traditional values like honesty,faith,mutual respect, respect for elders e.t.c. There are evidences in the past ,societies did not follow values demolished because of its own citizens. Another point is ,hard working and honesty in jobs needed for the development of the nation. For example, doctors working without honesty, kindness not only milking the money of the patients but also killing them.
Moreover,one of the main difference between human beings and animals are our value based society. If members in society not follows traditional values, there will be no difference between human being and animals.The rate of crimes will increase, there will be no safety for women and children, economy will go down, people will not follow any rules and regulations. Finally, a gradual erosion of values will distruct the society entirely. The entire society is living on the faith of value system ,if it were removed, human life on earth will not last long.
To conclude,, traditional values are vtal for the normal run of the society. Hence it is not advisable to rip out these values because of the technological advancement
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15053763441 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78864086199 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573476702509 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1579774304 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217606366949 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806050764965 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520842348414 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145856829243 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588055602465 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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