The pie chart compares two age groups in terms of what makes them happy.
Overall, although both groups have almost same attitude towards achievement at work and hobbies, the remaining interests vary according to the age group.
Achievement at work and hobbies are the two major things which makes both age group happy, it is 31% and 22% in under thirty age group, and 32% 2nd 24% in above thirty age group. Similarly, other factors also shows almost same trend in people who aged below thirty and above thirty 10% and 14% respectively.
In contrast , the remaining things are different for each age group. the people who aged below thirty interested in travelling and maintaining a good appearance with 15% and 18% respectively. However, these activities are totally absent in above thirty age group , instead of those activities they spent time for being with family and financial security 14% and 20%.
- The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 34
- Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? 10
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- Favourite school subject for boys in school 76
- Some people believe that it is better to build new museums and town halls instead of renovating the old ones To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01324503311 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50532347902 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5810003708 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300904902129 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157404312351 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945027818 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206429493565 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101808984066 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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