The pie chart shows eight popular subject for boys in a school.
Overall, it can be seen that science and physical education are the two most popular subjects for the boys, while history is the least favourite subject for the boys
Physical education is the most popular subject for boys in that school, a one third of the total boys like this subject. The second favourite subject for boys in this school is science, accounted for 25%. More than a half of the boys in this school either like physical education or science. Following science, mathematics comes in a third position, 18% of the total boys love to study this subject.
Technology, English and geography not that popular among the boys in this school, with 10%,8% and 5% respectively. The figure for history and other subjects 2% each and these are the two subject which least popular among the boys in this school.
- Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree) 78
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment D 78
- Obesity is now a major global epidemic What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem 82
- Some people believe that it is better to build new museums and town halls instead of renovating the old ones To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge 88
- It is more important for school children to learn about their local history than the world history. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the least favourite subject for the boys Physical education is the most popular ...
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... Following science, mathematics comes in a third position, 18% of the total boys ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35767497668 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483660130719 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8317927003 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.582088436711 0.215688989381 270% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.341657554067 0.103423049105 330% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159723977713 0.0843802449381 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.400803497025 0.15604864568 257% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806387565436 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 8.06136585366 79% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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