TPO- test16- the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide
Travel is a way for excitement and enjoyment and also that is a way to learn about culture of other countries. Traveling in a group led by tour leader can be amazing. Personally, I rather agree with this statement.
Travel with a group led by a tour guide might first seem expensive than travel lonely but travel with a group is more cost efficient and there are some reasons for this. Food and accommodation cost in travel with group are often less expensive than other types of travel. Because tour leaders know price and quality of all hotels and they can choose the best hotel and other equipment based on group members desirous. Traveling with tour guide is comfortable and members do not concern about providing food and hotel or even finding places. Tour leader manage everything that group need them. In the group traveling with leader there is a plan before they start to travel and members are aware about programs. People always have problem with travel stuff and they have to provide their own requirement by themselves so they cannot concentrate to traveling and they don’t enjoy from visiting new cities and places. This probably would be boring and exhausting travel for them.
In addition, travel with tour guide is much exciting and people always are happy with a good group. There are often some funny persons in group and they make joke and fun. Also people in a traveling group can learn from each other. For instance people can learn new skills such as fishing or plays and this make them happy and content. In addition traveling with group is safe, especially in some location of the world that there are some dangers such as Africa desert or Amazon forest. Sometimes traveling without tour leader in these regions is impossible.The obvious aspect of traveling with tour guide is tour leader’s knowledge about all places and their history. Tour leaders can tell information about those places, which is more valuable for tourists that are interested in visit of historical palace and buildings.
To put it in a nutshell, traveling with tour guide is so exciting, safe, comfortable and profitable. I think it makes great opportunity to people to learn and enjoy from travelling with group led by tour guide.
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| 2016-11-19 | epidemiology1 | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, for instance, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88976377953 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47583508551 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469816272966 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3537209058 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.15 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36721868093 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138319982276 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870079558924 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273171804991 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257822052007 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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