should parents limit the time their children spend on tv
Firstly, children should be allowed to watch only a limited number of programs on the TV because they are more emotionally vulnerable than adults. Today, most of the programs are filled with violence that can bear negative effects on kids and it is the parents’ responsibility to safeguard children from these programs. One effective way is to limit the amount of time children spend on TV and allocate it only to certain programs. A study conducted by MIT University revealed that at least eighty-five percent of programs broadcasted by TV has violence in them. This clearly indicates the paramount role of parents in putting some limits on children’s TV watch hour.
Secondly, physical well-being is another equally important gamut that can be jeopardized by the TV. In the contemporary era, we are suffering a great deal of (or plenty of) diseases correlated with obesity. One of the major sources of accumulation of excessive fat in our body is the result of prolonged hours of sitting in front of TV. This results in children obesity very fast which in turn will threaten their well-being when they grow up. My country’s health care system’s statistics is a good indication of this menacing trend. In my country, during last twenty years, the average amount of time spent on TV programs has escalated by nine times, at the same time, the average national weight has increased by five times which clearly depicts a tight relation between the amount of time spent on TV programs and obesity. Therefore, it is imperative for parents to restrict children to a certain amount of time for watching TV programs in order to protect their health condition
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01079136691 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90806148372 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8450549447 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.083333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39867702397 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127728061324 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104623827615 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306888499174 0.150856017488 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634177664027 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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