attending a live performance or watching the same event by TV
Undoubtedly, one of the foremost and central ambitions of all human beings is having a pleasant life without any anxieties, and they always make an effort to achieve this purpose. Pleasure has different meanings among people, and there are a lot of factors that have effects on it and bring it for people, like national sport events. While a large number of people prefer to attend a live performance rather than watching the same event on television, others have an opposite idea. Nevertheless, in my point of view, attending a live performance is more enjoyable; however, sometimes watching the same events on television is delightful.
Attending a live performance, which is received further consideration among the young, has countless advantages for people such as offering them more pastimes as well as leading them to release their emotion. Most people do not satisfy with few entertainments, and they desire to have a wide variety of pursuits. Going to a live performance provide an opportunity for people to experience different recreations. For example, going to a concert of their favorite singer can bring cheerful moments for them after a hard week. Moreover, in a performance there are many people who have at least one common feature that is the fondness for that event. It causes them to release their feelings without any shame, and it makes them be delighted. Hence, the happiness created after attending a live performance is not resulted only from that event, the most part of it is due to accompaniment of others.
In spite of advantages of attending a live performance, it is not debatable that watching the same event on television also has a number of benefits for people like making them be in a relaxed atmosphere as well as leading them to economize their time and money. In a live performance there are a lot of noise and many people; therefore, it is possible that people could not hear or see the performance clearly. Almost all people believe that there is nowhere more comfortable than their home. Owing to, they can change the channel if the program is dull, sit as close as they want to the television set, or increase or decrease the volume. In addition, attending a live performance require to spend much time and money. People should purchase the ticket, and leave their home at least two hours before starting the performance to park their automobiles or to find their seats. If they pursue that event at home, they do not have these kinds of difficulties, and actually it brings them more joy.
In recapitulation, each person depending on his characteristics and his temperament prefers to either attend a live performance or watch the same event on television. According to what mentioned before, going to a live performance profits people to have a wonderful time. However, it would be monotonous if it repeated frequently. Therefore, sometimes it is better for them to watch events on television at home. Responsible organizations should purvey standard places for live performances to decline related problems. Also, they should prepare interesting programs for television to attract more people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ople, like national sport events. While a large number of people prefer to attend a live performa...
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Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
...n, attending a live performance require to spend much time and money. People should purc...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'at least', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21875 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.164930555556 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0920138888889 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.046263068375 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0659722222222 0.0685040099705 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116319444444 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0416666666667 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92221077755 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0381944444444 0.0309702414327 123% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0885416666667 0.0887237588012 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121527777778 0.0209618222197 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00868055555556 0.0139019557991 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3142.0 2387.08602151 132% => OK
No of words: 520.0 408.028673835 127% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04230769231 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369230769231 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.174417080927 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136538461538 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92221077755 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480769230769 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.4718468271 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6666666667 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6937077786 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.916666667 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.708333333333 0.644075263715 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 49.1666666667 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.31515151515 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250723389851 0.300154397459 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0870247704999 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0676236016575 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.450297863005 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.094670168261 0.151897553556 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094182494282 0.114077575197 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890112054631 0.0781384742642 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.453254853576 0.336927656856 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0857812405986 0.067059652881 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189427844805 0.210909579961 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485776774227 0.0618886996521 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.