The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by math on Wed, 11/23/2016 - 09:20

The pie charts compares Italy and Yemen in terms of percentage of different age groups in two different years 2000 and 2050.
Overall. it can be noticed that, the proportion of people who aged above 60 doubled during the period in Italy while, in Yemen the percentage of 15 to 59 age group increased in the same period.
In 2000, the percentage of people in 0 to 14 age group was almost a half in Yemen and the percentage of same age group was almost three times less for Italy than Yemen, only 14.3%. In the same year, proportion of people between 15 and 59 age group accounted for almost a half for Yemen (46.3%) and almost a two third (61%) for Italy. The percentage of aged people in Italy was almost a quarter (24.1%) in 2000 and the figure for this group in Yemen was insignificant, only 3.6%. in the same year.
After 50 years, in 2050, 15 to 59 and above 60 age groups expected to rise in Yemen to 57.3% and 5.7% respectively. However ,the children aged between 0 to 14 will reduce in percentage. When looking at Italys figure the figure for elderly people almost doubled comparing to the figure in 2000 while, the the the other age groups proportion dropped.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42790697674 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37739489568 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432558139535 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4200806238 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185118205044 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940559361496 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499553245815 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133600352655 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344451045294 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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