TPO 03 - Question 1
| Post dates | Users | rates | Contents |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-04-17 | micro0o0 | 60.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-04-04 | Nerilene | 60.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-10-06 | Aftab1 | 83.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2017-04-08 | Av9ash | 70.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-04-20 | rahul chauhan | 83.00 | Check this speaking |
- Speaking topic in text TPO 02 Question 2 Some college students choose to take courses in a variety of subject areas in order to get a broad education Others choose to focus on a single subject area in order to have a deeper understanding of that area Whic 10
- 2914 does culture determine sense of humor 57
- 2142 how do our friendships change as we grow older? 70
- 1278 Describe an interesting event in history you knowYou should sayWho the event wasWhen and where it occurredWho was leading the eventHow you know about itAnd explain why you think it was interesting 70
- TPO 43-4 80
Comments
oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.