TPO 03 - Question 1
Post dates | Users | rates | Contents |
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2017-03-24 | archimo | 50.00 | Check this speaking |
2016-10-23 | Toefl2016 | 80.00 | Check this speaking |
2017-04-08 | Av9ash | 70.00 | Check this speaking |
2018-06-06 | elahehmaleki | 60.00 | Check this speaking |
2018-09-28 | daryash72 | 50.00 | Check this speaking |
- 2013 do women still have too heavy a burden in their day to day life? 80
- 2912 how often do you laugh? 67
- 558 do you think a society can benefit if its members have experience of travelling to other countries? In what ways? 80
- 895 what are the typical choices people make at different stages of their lives?
- 2412 Is fashion the same all around the world? 70
Comments
oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.