TPO 03 - Question 1
| Post dates | Users | rates | Contents |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-06-06 | elahehmaleki | 60.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2019-05-20 | ahmet vahibe | 78.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2017-03-13 | mahabub | 50.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-09-13 | mgrajapt | 60.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2016-12-02 | JohnNYC | 70.00 | Check this speaking |
- 503 which groups of people generally need most support in a community? why? 80
- 2662 would you like to have more trees in your area?? 80
- 1667 what you do in your spare time. do you have any hobbies or interests? 70
- 1198 Describe a story you liked to listen to when you were a childYou Should SayWhat’s the name of the storyWho told you the storyWhat’s it aboutAnd explain how you feel about this story 70
- 968 describe a song or a piece of music you likeyou should saywhat the song or music iswhat kind of song or music it iswhere you first heard itand explain why you like it. 80
Comments
oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.