The two maps illustrate plan of an island, pre and post construction of a touristic resort. In the south of the island a T shaped pier was built for touristic boats, and yachts. The pier is connected with a road, leading to the Reception, located in the middle of the island. This road also rounds up the reception on both sides and connects at north of the reception to the restaurant, where guests can have their meals.
On the right of the reception, namely on the east of the island, there are 9 accommodation suits located in a circular fashion and connected each other with a footpath. From this point and on, the east part of the island is untouched and covered with threes.
Similarly on the west of the reception there are 6 accommodation units, connected each other with a circular path, and in the middle of this pat a small park can be found. To the west of this footpath is the beach where people can swim and enjoy the sun.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a circular fashion" with adverb for "circular"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...there are 9 accommodation suits located in a circular fashion and connected each other with a footpat...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...s untouched and covered with threes. Similarly on the west of the reception there are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45664739884 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53286065019 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526011560694 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0589794642 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113367974609 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598012727568 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072708181113 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717891092621 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608327930559 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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