I strongly disagree with the idea that in twenty years there will be fewer cars. Demands for car arise each year by growing population in the world compare to last decade. In addition, automobile companies launch new car each year which has influence people to buy the modern one.
To begin with, car companies provides the new technology which is the effective way for reducing fuel consume. Then, it helps to decrease air pollution and also deducts the cost of petrol. Also, they have been increased their production line and hire innovative employer to manufacture creative cars.
Second reason is that cars has a positive financial effect. To give an example; car insurance is one of main requirement for a driving a car in my country. That`s why insurance company has been gained lots of income every year from each members.
Third, peaple prefers to have their privite car, compare to use public transportion like bus, subway and train. As for me, when I was child, we had a car that was not new-fashioned. By the time, my parents bought two cars which had a modern systems. we are barely using public service and prefer to drive a car. But sometimes it is time consuming to stuck in a traffic jam. Especially when we must visit our family and friends in the large city.
Come to conclusion with the factors I outline, I still belive that using cars will be progressed compare to preceding years. Moreover, the qulity of the road has been improving that helps to have safe drive during day and night.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'system'?
Suggestion: system
...ents bought two cars which had a modern systems. we are barely using public service and...
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Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ht two cars which had a modern systems. we are barely using public service and pre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, second, so, still, then, third, as for, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51067509643 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.4731235752 48.9658058833 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.1176470588 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164935768273 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552857270597 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671071219566 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936957499491 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523329150969 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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