What do you want most in a friend-someone who is intelligent, someone who has a sense of humor or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristic is most important to you?
It seems among so many important characteristic such as intelligence, reliability and honesty that a good friend should have, very difficult to prefer one to another. Frankly, I find myself more inclined to have a reliable friend and I think it is the most significant quality for a good companion. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, we can share our secrets, concerns and interests easily with a reliable person. Since she is faithful, she never reveals our secrets. In my opinion, a reliable person is also helpful and considerate. For instance, last summer, I wanted to run a business but I was hesitated because I did now know anything about it. So I talked with my friend and since she was reliable, she never talked about my decision with other people. Besides, she helped my initiate my work.
Secondly, if we decide to have a trip, we can trust her and give the key of our house for watering the flowers and picking up the mails. For example, last year, my mother became sick and I had to leave my house and go to my home town but I could not take my children. So that I asked my reliable friend to come to my house and take care of my kids.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that other qualities like smartness and having the sense of humor are as important as reliability. For example, an intelligent friend will help us solve our challenges in a more convenient way and a person with a sense of humor makes us smile and feel happy.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that all characteristic are important and it is difficult to prefer one to another but I would like to have a reliable friend based on the reasons which I outlined above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, frankly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53459119497 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7204656784 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2774524237 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103277919616 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382678223005 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389949193875 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707917220495 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401029228121 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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