Some nations are more suitable for bicycle use, however, unfortunately these countries are not using bicycle for transportation much. This essay examines the possible causes for this trend and suggest some solutions to this problem.
Countries like India and China have many advantages, if the people there use bicycles for transportation. Nevertheless, people in these countries not interested in using this humble vehicle for many reasons. First and foremost, there is no special track for bicycles in these countries. Obviously, people are afraid to drive their bicycles along with the heavy vehicles on the road such as, bus, truck e.t.c. For example, many bicycle users have been dying because of the heavy vehicles on the road. Another important reason is, nowadays even the common man became more lazy comparing to past. They do not prefer to take the effort of cycling, since they have motor vehicles , which give a lot of comforts. For instance, a bicycle user have to face uncountable challenges on the road such as, smoke, extreme weather conditions and threat from heavy vehicles, instead a car user can reach his office without any of the above mentioned problems.
However, there are some practical solutions for these problems. Governments must take initiative to build separate track for the bicycles as the bicycle is a eco friendly vehicle . By doing this governments can cut do its cost on fossil fuel importing, which is too costly. Encouraging people to use this wheel vehicle will help to bring down the pollution in major cities. China, for example, tried this by constructing separate path for bicycle users in Beijing, and officials in Beijing opined that, the pollution in this city dropped drastically after the number of bicycle users increased. Secondly, impose heavy tax on private motor vehicles. Heavy tax on cars will compel people to use bicycles and this tax money should be used educated the people about the benefits of bicycle using.
To conclude, there are many challenges to motivate the bicycle usage. However, fortunately, we have enough remedies to overcome these challenges. Government must take the necessary steps to encourage the bicycle usage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22379603399 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64159275801 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555240793201 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1173298096 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0526315789 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344231099444 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114915588111 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101851805695 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227923177684 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989309211818 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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