International travel is extremely popular these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Include your opinion and examples from your own experience
Quick means of transportation and cheap travel packages has made it easier to explore various destinations around the world. Therefore, international tourism is becoming common in the current era. On the one hand, there are numerous advantages of this development. On the other side of the coin, its drawbacks cannot be overlooked.
To begin with pros, firstly, traveling to different country provides tourists an opportunity to explore plenty of different destinations which they might not see in their homeland. For instance, people from land landlocked countries such as Central Asia prefer to travel South Asian countries and areas around the South China Sea to relish warm waters and ocean. Secondly, international tourism has become a lucrative industry especially for developing countries like Indonesia and Taiwan. Foreign exchange earned fuels economy and improve lives of people. Finally, when people from diverse cultures and regions meet, it gives them a chance to understand traditions, norms and the life styles of each locality.
A rapid growth of tourism industry has also brought some drawbacks. With soaring competition among travel agencies, it has become difficult for tourists select the right one. Many travelers often get deceived by the packages agent offer which results in ruining their trip. Furthermore, ease of travel has made it possible to explore the remotest areas around the world. The pristine environment of these regions is now vulnerable to pollution. This exposure is undoubtedly affecting terrestrial and aquatic life adversely.
To recapitulate, traveling across the globe has a positive impact on both tourists and visited country in terms of enhancing harmony, peace and surging economy of destination. However, its negative aspects such as intruding into lives of natives and detrimental effects on surroundings cannot be ignored.
- Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children.What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?Give reasons for your answer and include any 56
- Some people say that television is useful for education, while other say it is useful only for entertainment.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 95
- Nowadays most large companies operate multi nationally To what extent those companies should have a responsibility towards local communities in which they operate 89
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion 93
- While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Asia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...ndlocked countries such as Central Asia prefer to travel South Asian countries and are...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'packages'' or 'package's'?
Suggestion: packages'; package's
...any travelers often get deceived by the packages agent offer which results in ruining th...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6013986014 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86826687449 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63986013986 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0292325528 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2352941176 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993487384427 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302120960845 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235693694877 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581220228073 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239503168164 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.