It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge. Do disadvantages of this development for society outweigh advantages?
In Modern era electronic equipment and means of transportation are considered to be basic necessities of life.A vast majority of population desires to have these in their lives. I believe benefits of this development out number drawbacks.
To begin with positive aspects, firstly, electronic products such as televisions, refrigerators and vehicles are an integral part of life nowadays. For instance, Television is a source of information and favorite pass time for many people. Secondly, to stay in touch with current affairs and watch movies, dramas and talk shows in leisure public prefer to have television at home. Additionally, some folks feel uncomfortable on public transport and give precedence to self-owned vehicles over buses, trams and trains. Moreover, having own transport provide people an edge as they are not dependent on a schedule of city transport and traveling to remote areas could be possible as well.
On the other side of the coin, few negative aspects aspect should also be considered. Since the invention of electrical appliances like television,radio and computers people have become sluggish. Instead of outdoor activities, in free time they choose to stay home and watch their favorite shows. With such habits in a society, people might forget the social values and norms. In addition to that, slothful attitude, especially of a juvenile will prove to be dreadful and without sports activities, they are more prone to diseases. Similarly with increasing number of cars environment will become vulnerable to pollution and smoke emitted from a vehicle is evidently a health hazard.
To recapitulate, I consider electronic products and vehicles are vital components of modern time. These necessities lessen the workload from lives of people and that time could be spent on other productive activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44055944056 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99191209305 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625874125874 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0995926988 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.733333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0847497410728 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288243274826 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400146957816 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487537224412 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362331853377 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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