Dear Sir,
I am a student of B.Tech (EEE) branch studying in 3 semester. As there is a vacant room in my apartment, I am writing this letter to seek your help in renting it out to a fellow student.
I am living in a 3 bedroom apartment, just 5 mins walking from the university campus. Two of the rooms are already occupied and only 1 room is vacant, as one of the roommate dropped out of the university course and moved back to his hometown since past 10 days. We have spacious rooms with attached bathroom and a common kitchen. We also have parking facility available and all the necessary requirements like stationary shop, medicine shop etc are situated nearby.
We are planning to rent out the third room as we intend to keep the overall housing expenses to minimum. Me and my flatmate are both quite studious and we do not drink or smoke as well. We would be expecting the same from our new flatmate.
It will be very kind of you if you could help us out in renting it. We are also planning to put this on the university notice board.
Your sincerely,
Manpreet Walia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tech
Dear Sir, I am a student of B.Tech EEE branch studying in 3 semester. As t...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'semester' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'semesters'.
Suggestion: semesters
...dent of B.Tech EEE branch studying in 3 semester. As there is a vacant room in my apartm...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dicine shop etc are situated nearby. We are planning to rent out the third room...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, third, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.435 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4878454534 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2872005012 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9166666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292266457424 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932277870563 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815441920327 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167380439955 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469415211183 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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