Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends?
Upon the question, do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends, different people have different opinions based on their emotion, education, culture, etc. From my point of view, each option has its unique advantages and disadvantages but I think the benefits of spending time alone outweigh the advantages of being with friends. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, I have to study most of the time. As a biology student, I should look for additional information in textbooks or journal articles. So that I cannot spend my time with friends because I want to concentrate on my lessons, seminars and projects. People usually want to talk with their friends, gossip or eat snacks when they meet their relatives or friends. In my opinion, doing these kinds of activities is a waste of time and we should spend our free time studying, exercising and other useful activities.
In the second place, people have different desires and ideas. For instance, I would like to go to cinema or concert on weekends but my friends prefer to travel abroad. So if I spend my time alone, I will go wherever I want without any disagreement. Furthermore, people usually do not think about different things in the same way. They have various opinions so it is possible to arise a conflict between persons when they talk about a specific thing.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that, sometimes having a companion is a good idea. For example, I would like to travel with my friends because we can talk about various issues during the trip, play card and assign different tasks to different persons.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that spending time alone is better than being with friends based on the reasons which I outlined above. However, in some situations like traveling is better to have a companion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, in my opinion, in the same way, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8527607362 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68926574557 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549079754601 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3017167587 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0588235294 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76470588235 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4284588478 0.236089414692 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119485702589 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100431039092 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225947007986 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972237098334 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.