People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Attitude is the psychological tendency that is expressed by evaluating certain object, including the phrase ‘like and dislike’, ‘optimistic and perssimistic’, ‘calm and horrific’, ‘happy and melancholy’. And people’s attitude always changes, sometimes they become conflicting and ambivalent toward an object. However, people’s attitudes often are influenced by both their immediate situation or surroundings and society as a whole, and other factors like their internal characteristics. Among all these factors, it is hard to decide the accurate proportion of each factor that it plays a role in forming people’s attitude.
In the process of growing up, people gradually form their own perception, behavior, emotion, idea toward the outside world by their immediate situation or surroundings. Earlier, when they are a child, they are influenced mostly by the members of their family, who teach them talk, walk, and express their feelings. Later, with the expansion of their social circle, they are gradully integrated into the community of a bigger scope, such as circle of schoolmate or friend or colleague, and other different circles of business. Their standpoint and attitude are greatly affected by people around them. Generally speaking, a family with an atmosphere of happiness, hard work, equality, solidarity, easily cultivates a happy, optimistic, diligent child; a person who gets along with a group of joyful, positive, loving, coadjutant friends is more sanguine, benevolent, but a man who plays with a pack of rogues like marauding gang and drug dealers also develops a bad habit, even walk up on the way to crime. At work, people can learn cooperation and competitiveness with his colleagues, and their attitudes largely depend on their working conditions and atmosphere. For instance, a man who had ever experienced earthquake, tsunami, would become more adamant, bravery. No doubt, people always are influenced by their surroundings to varying degrees.
On the other hand, it is inevitable that people are increasingly affected by the whole society due to their contact with more and more things, not confining within the scope of their immediate situations or surroundings. They can read books from home and abroad, travel to various areas to understand local customs and practices, even obtain a lot of information about the world by the internet, all of which will have a subtle influence on one’s concept, behavior. For example, Bill Gates, the founder of microsoft, is the richest man in the world but is also the greatest philanthropist, whose action produces deep influence on the world, Mayun, the CEO of alibaba, imitates Gates to become the no.1 philanthropist in China. The campaign against terrorism after the 9.11 event has become the global concensus in which people well understand the hazard of terrorist organization. Moreover, poetical justice in a nation will promote people’s consciousness of good morality, a clean-figured, just and fair, highly-efficient government is the great model of all the fields in its society. Laws, as a kind of mandatory measure, keep people in order and make them to behave legally to live in the society.
With the passing to time, the adults, who gradually have developed their own stable outlook and value on life. Particularly, an old man usually makes his own analysis independently while facing all kinds of objects, and this analysis is based on his experience, education, cognition, less influenced by outside environemnet. His characteristics are his attitudes towards objects, his world vision is his viewpoint toward the world, as a guide of his action to dominate him to pursue his goal and realize his dream. The correct, scientific world view orientates people to a correct diretion, and vice versa. So, how important a person develops good characteristics in his life.
As a matter of fact, immediate situation or surroundings and the society join hands to exert their influence on people’s attitudes during different periods. But, finally, a man, who is in the old age, has formed a stable attitude towards objects, the reason of which is that they have experienced everyting that what’s possible has been done, and they have known human joys and sorrows.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 388, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are often
...bject. However, people's attitudes often are influenced by both their immediate situ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, as for, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 14.8657303371 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3649.0 2235.4752809 163% => OK
No of words: 671.0 442.535393258 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43815201192 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.08956458786 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19644859689 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 360.0 215.323595506 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53651266766 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 1126.8 704.065955056 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 5.0 0.740449438202 675% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2331462354 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.96 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.84 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371535093853 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112341661189 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125779055677 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220799868419 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115030144645 0.0667264976115 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 193.0 100.480337079 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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