Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone, sometimes, needs to decide something crucial. Both making a significant decision alone and deciding with somebody’s suggestions are advantageous. However, making a crucial decision alone is not my cup of tea. Thus, I prefer asking opinion from others before making important decisions since they can be aware of perspectives that I couldn’t, they may have experiences about it and there needs to be someone to ask for help in case of failure.
Initially, everyone has various perspective to subjects. They can differ from us in terms of the way they think. In other words, we can not consider something by thinking everything about it. Therefore, some crucial points may be overlooked. This is an abysmal circumstance that we don’t want it to exist. Since they point out different perspective, we can be aware of potential failures. For instance, I used to decide alone before, until I have realized that I can fail with the decision I took. My father always had suggested something about my issues. However, I used to never listened to him by making decisions. After a while, I found out that my fathers suggestions commenced to be beneficial for my decisions. Everytime I decided something, I, generally, failed with the decision. Moreover, my fathers suggestions took place in my issues and they were the correct ones, indeed.
Furthermore, we don’t know the consequences of our decisions, even we can anticipate them. However, this is a risky action which can be a failure for us. I believe that it is always beneficial to demand from someone else a suggestion about the subject they had before. Since they experienced it before and have ideas about the results of decision, they can presume the potential results of the decision that we aren’t sure about. Therefore, this provides precision approaches to the issues that we need to make decision for it.
Finally, after we made the decision and had the result of it, we need someone to help us for the failures of the decision. As it is quite tough to correct the results of the decision, we can demand for help. However, the person that we ask for help must be someone who is aware of the decision we took. Therefore, informing someone or requesting suggestions from someone else provides us people who can support us with the outputs of decision. On the other hand, we feel comfortable while applying the decision as we know there are people supporting us.
Eventually, some decisions can be crucial for our life. I don’t believe that it is a stunning step to decide alone. Nevertheless, I prefer getting suggestions from other people that I bank on since they can think in a different way, they have experienced it before and they can help in case of a failure of decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95299145299 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90393970403 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42735042735 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 749.7 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9659634866 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9310344828 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1379310345 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877892045609 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318873276234 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384569439978 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587597154332 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027055133309 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.