Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer?
Upon the question would you like to do work by hand or use machines, different people have different opinions based on their emotions, educations, etc. From my point of view, each option has its unique advantages and disadvantages but I prefer to use machines because it has countless benefits. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, using different types of machines such as laptop computer and printer will help people save time. For example, last week, I wanted to send mail to my classmates and invite them to a party. Instead of writing 20 letters, I typed only one letter and then printed it. So that, I could save my time and use it for other useful activities. In my opinion, computer and printer helped my do my work quickly and in a more convenient way.
In the second place, some kinds of machines like dishwashers and cloth washing machines save energy and natural resources like water. Currently, there are advanced machines in the market which use less amount of electricity and water. Undoubtedly, people will waste a huge amount of water if they wash their cloth or dishes by hand. Furthermore, these machines wash dirty clothes or dishes better and make them cleaner.
Last but not least, most employers prefer to use machines in their companies because they produce high quality products and make fewer mistakes. All products are uniform and the production process takes less time. In addition, employers and managers can save money because if they want to recruit people to do work by hand, they have to spend more money.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that using machines has lots of benefits for people which I outlined above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89562289562 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57110338518 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6462871832 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288968427056 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776535300253 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741222515097 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146413569236 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687503495186 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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