In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures can be taken to prevent this?
Pollution from factories and construction results in the contamination of air and water, which is mainly problematic in third world countries. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with the poor quality of air and water.
Firstly, important reasons which contribute to air pollution include the carbon dioxide emissions released through burning fossil fuels in industries, the use of toxic material, and the high levels of dust generated via construction. This produces major problems, including the greenhouse effect, and ozone depletion that increases UV exposure causing health issues, such as skin cancer. Secondly, water pollution is a direct effect of the dumping of industrial waste and harmful substances in various water bodies. This induces severe health problems, which includes infection from water-borne diseases and kidney failure. Ergo, air and water contamination give rise to long term consequences to the environment and human health which have to be dealt with seriously.
There are a few effective solutions to the low quality of air and water. A couple of ways to tackle the air pollution problem is for industries to switch from fossil fuels to natural gases, and for construction companies to use environment-friendly materials; therefore, this will dramatically reduce the harmful emissions of carbon dioxide and other pollutants. Water pollution can be prevented if industries and construction companies stop dumping their waste in water bodies; instead, they should use appropriate and safe methods to get rid of their toxic substances. Also, an improved filtration system should be introduced to purify the water. Hence, this will prevent a plethora of diseases and allow people to drink clean water.
In conclusion, placing and following proper guidelines to help factories and construction companies operate safely will prevent critical consequences of water and air contamination from occurring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61616161616 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06525299792 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8871441505 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.307692308 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291020114677 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109890450691 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042115945707 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181478045499 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510925783081 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.