Everyone would say that they agree that telling the truth is important to keep a good relationship between people, but not everyone are really sure of that. The point is, that it is politically correct to affirm that premise. In my opinion, and at my age, I learnt that telling the truth is always better than keep secrets in a relationship.
First of all, I consider that hide, lie, or keep secrets, between two or more people, only would jeopardise the trust between them. Moreover, if you are trying to build a long term relationship with someone. To illustrate better this point, I want to bring up that a frequent cause of divorce occurs when one of the members discovers a secret not revealed on time from one of the partners. The trust, in this case, is broken as a chrystal broken which it pieces could never be fixed again.
Secondly, many people think that white lies are inoffensive and also necessaries in some cases. For example, tell to your friend that her new shorthair looks great when it does not, is a good action to do. I used to agree with that position, but I think now, that the best thing to do is just telling the truth. In fact, my experience tough me, that sooner or later, the lie, even white, would be unveiled and the friendship could be affected.
Finally, the lier, who keep a lie or secret, will suffer a great deal of stress. Lies demand a lot of work to keep them in a long term. Furthermore, the lier has to have a great memory if he or she wants to keep that lie in time. Consequently, the lier would be under a huge stress. When you tell the truth, it is always easier to remember even the most little details.
In summary, no matter what circunstances you are, or in what kind of relationship, it is my opinion that it is always better to tell the truth, if you want to have a healthier relationship with others, and better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, i think, in fact, in summary, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, in some cases, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43641618497 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48366140171 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540462427746 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9264277653 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2941176471 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1764705882 5.45110844103 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193677706449 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596442154869 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689342476348 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112046996833 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446529902897 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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