Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
In these days there has been much controversy about well-informed about global event and caused quite a stir in numerous circles and camps . Different people may give various types of response based upon their social, cultural and even familiar background. Although majority of people contemplate that watching and listening to news which has little to do with our life is just waste of time , other posit that knowing about events around us loom large in every aspect of individual .However when it comes to me I conspicuously declare that everyone should be well informed about the global news on account of the following reasons.
To begin with, it is an inevitable fact that news related to relationship between countries has a substantial impact in our political and economical status. Takes it a s an example, the boycott assigned by United States for Iran degrade the economic situation for our community. Or the political relation between countries could alter the visa getter for prospective students who inclined to study in International countries. Consequently, being aware of up-to-date news assist to be prepared to deal with every potential circumstance and happening related to economy and politic in the future.
Second, knowing global news play an important role to broad our knowledge and understanding of real world. For instance, an adult who grows in affluent family with any obstacles and lack the experiences of working class ‘s life or social issues such as poverty or homelessness will expand his or her mind by getting information from international news. His viewpoint would be influenced to extent that he or she might modify his way, for instance contribution in charity or running the business to help the unemployed people. As a result, people are probably willing to associate in their community more than before which is great for development of our society.
Last but not least, news is contributory factor for starting our social interacts with unfamiliar people. In fact, watching or listening news engender fascinating topics for our discussions. For instance you are might invited to a party where you do not know anybody. Consequently, piece f news for example marriage of a celebrity or war between countries could be a outstanding topic for our conversation with unfamiliar people.
To put it in a nutshell, a growing body of paragraph support this undeniable fact that aware of international news help us in divers ways no matter whether they has nothing to do with our daily life. Back to beginning controversial question, I cite a quite bias in favor of this indisputable fact that expanding our knowledge, preparing for upcoming transformation in economy of politics of our country and great topic for our discussion are brought by well informed about the world around us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16122004357 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94330912255 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58605664488 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8054786162 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.352941176 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162761984959 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528906934754 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491527292862 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927103285574 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447020293764 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 86.8835125448 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.