Without a doubt, some people will argue that have a broad knowledge is better that to specialise in one subject while other may consider the opposite point of view. As far as I am concern, I firmly agree with the second option. In our modern and complex society, competition and market segmentation obligate professionals to be more and more specialised in their areas of study or business.
First of all, today, it is important that a graduated student understands that the job market is complex and very competitive, no matter what career the student is pursuing. In fact, competition is the principal factor a new graduated student will face not only in his or her first job, but along all his or her career. By this token, the best way to acquire some advantage over others is specialising in one subject, being the best in it and not good in many as many others. Thus, the specialisation may be considered the principal factor to success in his or her career.
Additionally, the market today, in focusing more and more in market segmentation, where not only a target consumer is identify by a company in a marketing strategy, but also the professionals involved in the satisfaction of that demand. For example, communication can be an interesting subject but also too wide to embrace and to general to teach about. On the other hand, a specialist in social media or graphic journalism can reduce the area of study and create a more effective class with a teacher specialised in the subject. Again, the specialisation would add an advantage and a better possibility to get a job.
In summary, considering the reasons explained above, I firmly believe that a student will have a more successful professional career if she or he specialise in one specific subject and not in a broad academic subjects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'broad knowledge'.
Suggestion: broad knowledge
...doubt, some people will argue that have a broad knowledge is better that to specialise in one sub...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'identified'.
Suggestion: identified
...on, where not only a target consumer is identify by a company in a marketing strategy, b...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'specialises'.
Suggestion: specialises
...essful professional career if she or he specialise in one specific subject and not in a br...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'subject'?
Suggestion: subject
...fic subject and not in a broad academic subjects.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for example, in fact, in summary, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84838709677 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98478451578 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4460283766 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140882347493 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054424476262 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628500837417 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10484456797 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593153596682 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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