It is more important to have a job you enjoy doing than a job which pays well. How far do you agree with the statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, at the time economical instability it is essential to be satisfied with the job people have. I personally agree with the statement that it is indispensible to have a job people enjoy doing than a job which pays well. The reasons why I hold this statnce will be elaborated in the paragraphs bellow.
One of the reason is that enjoyable job less stressful. There are a myriad of drawbacks people face in life, such as difficult relationships with others or weak health. In this case it is crucial to avoid stresses as much as possible. If the person constantly experiences negative emotions at work, his life can become more complicated. On the other hand, if the individual is happy in the work`s environment, it can decrease his stessfulness and fasilitate well-being. Although money plays signifficant role in the person`s satisfaction in life, high salaries cannot make him healthier. Tho that end, enjoyable job contribute to people`s happines.
Another reason is that pleasant job enables humans` development. It is obveous that when a person likes his job`s activities, he tends to learn more about them. Threfore, the individual is willing to enhance his knowledge in the field, by attending scores of educational programms and reading a variaty of learning materials. All of this makes the person a professional. Moreover, if the person is highly knowledgeable, hi can be noticed by others and may have a chance to obtain rise to his pay check. Conversally, when people already have significant salaries, they very often cease to look for ways to envolve as professionals. So, having an enjoyable jod makes people to move forward and increase their intellectial abilities.
To recapitulate, I feel that it is crucial to have a job people are happy with. This is because it helps them decrease the amount of negative emosioms they may face and enbles them to develop. All things considered, it is reasonable to assume that enjoyable job facilitates to excel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...joyable job less stressful. There are a myriad of drawbacks people face in life, such ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13149847095 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1425139543 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584097859327 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9570943184 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238393487397 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792100482443 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109139310853 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169339250697 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100252393975 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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