Essay topics:
In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Ganning weight in children is a problem which leads to lots of serious heath issues. I myself think that there are many causes and the followings are some of them.
Undoubtebly, most of outweight children are heavily influenced by food or bevarage commercials which still influences us, adult persons. For instance, thousands of food commercials Is on social media
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 41.998997996 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 307.0 1615.20841683 19% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 59.0 315.596192385 19% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20338983051 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.77148800248 4.20363070211 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81733461231 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 49.0 176.041082164 28% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.830508474576 0.561755894193 148% => OK
syllable_count: 89.1 506.74238477 18% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 27.748873851 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.75 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0799204562876 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489504732625 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519203178198 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656122710767 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457031265957 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 78.4519038076 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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