Essay topics:
In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Ganning weight in proportion of children is arguably a considerable problem which leads to lots of serious heath issues. I myself think that there are numerous causes out there and the followings are some of them.
Undoubtebly, most of outweight children are heavily influenced by food or bevarage commercials which still influences us, adult persons. For instance, thousands of exquisite food commercials are being broadcasted on social media
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 377.0 1615.20841683 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 68.0 315.596192385 22% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54411764706 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.87162171103 4.20363070211 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97782316397 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 56.0 176.041082164 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.823529411765 0.561755894193 147% => OK
syllable_count: 111.6 506.74238477 22% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 19.1098796438 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0585944544537 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033732293606 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288674933524 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456728485167 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267679707337 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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