In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Modern life indicates an increasing trend that more people seem to prefer living alone particularly in large cities in developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative effects in equal measure.
People who choose to live alone completely have freedom to make decisions on how they live, that they don’t have to adapt to anyone else’s timeable. They can decide how to decorate house with their own style or can sleep whenever they want without fear of affecting other people. Besides, living alone mean they have to do everything themselves such as cooking, cleaning, washing,… this cause an improvement to their independent skills. In this view, it is totally a positive development to live in modern world.
However, living alone style can be considered from the opposite angle. Nowadays the cost of living is higher than in the past so this trend can cause the burden of household bills while they can be able to reduce it by sharing with other people and spend money on other necessary needs. Moreover, people can experience the loneliness, boring lives and lacking of safety. When they get ill, it is difficult to get any help or they can miss out the supportive conversation with family or flatmates. In this sense, the trend towards living alone is a negative one.
In conclusion, the increase in living alone will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on people lives.
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Suggestion: , …
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04201680672 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59599948621 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584033613445 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0974348296 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276730271155 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113697880015 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063668420479 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168264812133 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335454339883 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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