More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country.
Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
It is true, that for the last couple decades more and more people choose to get education abroad and every year this tendention grows up really fast. So, in this essay we will try to compared some benefits and drowbacks and try to understand what better stay in home country for studying or choose more difficult way and go in foreign country.
In the one hand studying abroad open a huge amount of places where possible to get education for any specialities and direction which can be interesting for students. Like a result of high quality of education mach more easy to get "job from the dreams" and go up by career ladder. It also an awesome opportunity for living in more developed countries then home country and have higher level quality of life. It good reason to find a new friends from another countries, approach to their culture and customs. Besides, during the studying, very good idea to learn foregen lenguages or improve them.
In the other hand education in different countries can bring problems or difficulties. Firstly, it is expansive and not everyone can allow it, because necessary to rent a flat or pay for room in dormitiry, need money for public transport and meal, in result student should to find some job besides the studying or get money from parents and make a damage for family badget. Secondly, can uccut problems with embassy for getting the visa for visit to another country, sometimes it is take a long period of time till6 months, also need to spend money for it. Thirdly, psychologigal aspect can have a place in this question. When peaple arrived and stay far from their family they can feel homesickness and stress which can be damaged for studying.
In conclusion the tendention of studying abroad can have a place in our life and become more popular day by day becouse some benefints like living in developed countries and opportunity to get a high salary job can outweigh all drowbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81791044776 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56910027651 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558208955224 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7162815494 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.153846154 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174132807933 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602182440831 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691080578701 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133305177176 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863550932356 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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