New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The advent of new technologies and ways of buying and selling have changed the lives of consumers. After pondering the pros and cons of this phenomenon, I totally agree with this opinion. My viewpoint is supported by these following reasons.
First and foremost, what I hold as my priority is that by hi-tech equipment and a significant of online-purchase websites, people don't have to go to market or supermarket to find look for and buy food. All they need is just sitting at home surfing the web for commodities they want and call the service to buy them or even by one click the mouse button on the items. It is no doubt that purchasing everything is becoming easier and easier. We can save a lot of time thanks to this new method of buying and selling.
Another compelling reason is that with the new technologies and ways of buying and selling we can avoid many nuisances such as the crowd, robbery, shoplifters, or pickpockets.For example, instead of standing in a long queue waiting for the open time on Black Friday, we can buy clothing or anything even if we are at work or at home, which is very comfortable.
On the whole, the development of new technologies and ways of buying and selling have had a huge impact on the lives of buyers. I believe the advantages of this new purchase method will even more helpful in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, for example, no doubt, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60833333333 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7785887705 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.1414941345 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311743576517 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12545849192 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116739102555 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209886827512 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112380652505 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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