This statement claims that children should not be forced by law to be educated by either public schools or home schooling, if their parents do not wish them to be. I do not agree with this statement. Children are the future of any nation and society. It must require that all students learn same courses in their school life.
Education is very essential in this fattest life. I agree that in any society there must require law which force all students to go public school or home school. Because of all students go to school to learn the same courses, after the completion of their school life they have opportunity of choose their field. In school they learn all subjects and it is require that all students have knowledge of all fields and then they choose their interested subject in their college. For this I agree with this statement.
Parents are the actually their teachers. All children are learn more from their parents, but many thing their parents do not teach them and that all are teach them in schools. Because of this we call school is student's second home.
If parents do not want to send their children is school then its meaning that they want to teach them in their manner.
Then it is responsibility for them to give time to their children.
In our society, all parents are busy to earn money so that their children live their life easily, but they forget that this money is not worked if their children do not understand them. Most of time parents are busy in their office, business and their other task and they do not give time to their children. So that it is require to send their children in school so that then learn the basic step which is important in life like confidence, self-respect, interest, and responsibility. Students learn all this thing in only school not in home.
In conclusion, I states that school life is very important for all students and in society there must be law which is forced to all students to go school and learn which is very important in their life and they enjoy their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 358, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...chool they learn all subjects and it is require that all students have knowledge of all...
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Line 6, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...tually their teachers. All children are learn more from their parents, but many thing...
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Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
... are learn more from their parents, but many thing their parents do not teach them and tha...
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Line 6, column 154, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...ents do not teach them and that all are teach them in schools. Because of this we cal...
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Line 6, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and that all are teach them in schools. Because of this we call school is students seco...
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Line 6, column 233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...we call school is students second home. If parents do not want to send their child...
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Line 10, column 323, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...e time to their children. So that it is require to send their children in school so tha...
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Line 10, column 331, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: sending
...o their children. So that it is require to send their children in school so that then l...
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Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'state'
Suggestion: state
...school not in home. In conclusion, I states that school life is very important for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, second, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 33.0505617978 194% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62739726027 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33488318543 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.356164383562 0.4932671777 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.898516623 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8947368421 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63157894737 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414960852561 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153377371206 0.0831039109588 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152894390926 0.0758088955206 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25146161735 0.150359130593 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137506404741 0.0667264976115 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 48.8420337079 159% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.38706741573 77% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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