responsibilities
It is undeniable that the generation today has everything more easy-going for them than the older one. This also means there are some changes in the children’s roles in terms of responsibility. I personally believe the number of responsibilities they have to handle today has lessened.
The many generations before the one today, saw wars, famine, freedom struggles and liberalization. That was a generation that lived through adversity and pulled itself out of it. Naturally, the realization of responsibilities was very prominent among them. Also, there were many children to a couple in the past, unlike today, and the older siblings were given responsibility for the care of the younger ones.
With the development of societies and countries, the above-mentioned responsibilities have now ceased to exist. With increasing importance being placed on education, children now are basically responsible for performing well in academics and sports, technically making them skilled enough for a better career in future. As family sizes have reduced too, with facilities of day-care being easily available, children are not as accountable to oversee their younger siblings. All this is majorly true in the cases of developed and some developing countries.
In regards to the impact of such a development, I personally believe it is for the better. Children of the previous generations were not quite able to fully live and enjoy their childhood as children are now able to do – even if it means doing nothing and lazing around. Children 30 years ago became matured earlier than their time and were willing to contribute towards work and household as much as they could, whereas children nowadays are pretty relaxed in these concerns. I think this is a much better situation for children to grow up in.
Therefore, due to development in the lifestyle and conditions of the society, some countries are not placing many responsibilities on their children. There is much time to learn about the essential responsibilities as they grow up, so I feel they should not be overwhelmed with such things in their childhood.
- Some businesses now say that no one can smoke cigarettes in any of their offices Some governments have banned smoking in all public places This is a good idea but it takes away some of our freedom 63
- As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. 73
- Taking a year off 84
- Expenditure of countries 56
- Some people think that children sould learn to compete, but others think they should be taught to co-operate so they could become more useful aduls. Give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...them skilled enough for a better career in future. As family sizes have reduced too, with...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...loped and some developing countries. In regards to the impact of such a development, I per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26176470588 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17310687914 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6262448577 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.235294118 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210503448471 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814153914702 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101076681094 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140783969476 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793797217229 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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