People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that when people move to a foreign country, they should spend time on understanding customs and traditions of this country. However, I disagree that they should follow all of them, as will now be explained.
On the one hand, it is necessary that people should make an effort to perceive promptly customs and traditions of a new country where they commence to live. Primarily, this will create favorable conditions for them to enhance their sociable relationships. If you have a deeper understanding of the culture of a foreign country before staying there, you will get access to conversations with locals more easily and can make new friends. Furthermore, knowledge of foreign culture helps people to avoid awkward moments in a new country. For example, Dang, my friend, told me that he did not know British people always keep left when walking, so he walked to the right-hand side on their streets and bumped into some people.
On the other hand, although people should pay attention to foreign customs and traditions of a country where they begin to move in, they do not need to follow all of them. Firstly, some customs and traditions of a foreign country are not important, even with residences. Therefore, people will waste their time when trying to follow all things in order to adopt a new environment. Secondly, keeping traditional values in a foreign country allow people to respect their hometown cultures and attach importance to national history. Take my uncle as an example. Despite living in Australia for ten years, he still goes to Pagodas on Lunar New Year to remember sacrifices of their ancestors.
In conclusion, people should know cultures of a foreign country where they will live, but I disagree that they must follow all these customs and traditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... streets and bumped into some people. On the other hand, although people shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99333333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70009053346 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2758193056 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352640627616 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128482435749 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872914665384 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250491726522 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327354788387 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.