One of your pen friends wants to improve their English at a language school. they have never studied at a language school before and have asked for your advice on how to choose a good one. write a letter to your pen friend. advise them about the following the teaching method, the number of students in a class and the number of hours a week.
Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to explain my advice regarding your improvement in English at a language school.
First of all, I was so pleased to hear about that you have planned to enroll for English course at a language education institution. However, you have to know about the teaching method such as it is better if they have electronic gadgets in the classroom which can be beneficial for all learners to learn real conversation between each other throughout the world. Also, the number of students should not exceed fifteen in a single class otherwise you may face communication problem with a tutor while studying in a classroom.
To top it all off, according to my point of view, you have to spend at least 30 hours in a week to get better command in such international language. Hope it would be helpful while selecting a language school for an aforesaid purpose. If you need any more advice, just drop me a line.
All the best,
john
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, at least, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70285714286 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66230527696 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2333323414 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 4.34317383033 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235911197428 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932753447706 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10355586914 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183416365266 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885820783831 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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