Many people had been involved in sports as children, but don’t do any physical exercise as adults. What are the reasons people avoid physical exercise? How to overcome this trend and motivate to be more physically active?
The role of games and sports in overall development of a person is terrific. Presently, juveniles tend to neglect every kind of physical activity, despite its umpteen advantages. Here I would account for the causative factors and remedial solutions to overcome this growing concern.
There are manifold reasons behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, grown-ups enter into rat-race of earning back and belly and therefore they do not indulge in sports. For instance, unlike children, adults have to take numerous responsibilities in order to support their families financially. Consequently, they are left with no sufficient time to indulge themselves in games while undertaking all responsibilities. On the top of it, aspirations to excel in professional domains stimulate them to avert sport.
Further emphasizing, physical exercise are at low ebb due to advancement of technology. To elaborate, cell phones, laptops and so on tend grab the entire attention of youngster during their leisure time which has made sport to take a back seat in their lives. As a result, they become physically inactive which is responsible for unhealthy young-generation. Aside from that, other tempting activities such as shopping, visiting theaters and eating outlets, party and so on has discouraged games among them.
Numerous remedial measures can be taken to motivate youngsters to be fit as fiddle. To begin with, adults are more prone to stress. Thus, they must be inspired to engage in games or sports so that they can unwind themselves from the hassles of achieving more and more. Moreover, parents should be obliged to create awareness the significance of sports and energetic physique.
To recapitulate, it can be seen that sports and games uplift the standard of health wealth and relationships. Thence its importance in our lines cannot we underestimated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39518900344 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12132307508 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7704439867 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2222222222 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173456290651 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479432784911 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358829620726 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827594956198 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305888464231 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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