"modern day is inevitably in a modern society" said Bertrand Russel one of the brilliant mind through the history. There is no doubt young people with plan is one of the hectic phenomena in every society. affecting people in all walk of life considerably. The question, however, whether young people can have ability to plan with in complex or cannot has sparked a spirited debate among people recently. I am, to a huge extent, prefer to choose adult people can have ability to plan with in complex. In the ensuing paragraph i will try to shed some light in my perspective with ample example and conspicuous reasons.
the exquisite to be mentioned is that it is crystal clear that when mankind can improve technology. people try to follow them. for example can learn computer and driving all technical can change their life. young people can have many plane with this skill so young boy and girl can goal in her mind and sometimes might in his/ her computer. so young people can many convenient more than past young people due to can learn all skill in school or extra class can go to the abroad country. in addition, today people will learn and improve so this simple. as an example I will have many plan in my life first step I write them in the note book like English course. so with computer started so this computer helps me improve my skill for organization my information in my mind.
another reason which deserve some words here is that nobody can deny that today It is hard and difficult to have plane and organize. young people now go to the consulting doctor and speak with them. they help them for school or university. For example, when I was in high school I should choose my major so It is hard due to my adventure depended with this decision. so I and my mother go to consulting doctor. He measure my ability for math and accounting and computer and art but in the accounting ability are the best percent of course I choose this major. now I 'm working in big company with my major. It was very useful for me. so in advance technology and world young people can assess them. they have used them in positive way.
although the afore-mentioned reasons are the first reason which cross the mind at the first glance, they are no mean that the only ones which available. actually there is another subtle point which must be born in our mind. It should be noted that nobody can deny that while education and job and other skill increased in all world people can choose them simple certainly I do absolutely people while in the flourishing and blossom can plane in the schedule and can make them with climax point. for example, my brother went to university but he does not like his major. he can change major with chief plan.
to make long story short, from all the above mentioned reasons and points , one can safety draw a conclusion that if one weight merit and demerit of above statement , we can realize that young people in modern life is very complex but can make many ability to plan and organize.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, no doubt, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 9.8082437276 285% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55412844037 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38691755475 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453211009174 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 785.7 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8763409617 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7333333333 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03333333333 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238485789077 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739521301251 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562207634873 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156265827192 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632417930929 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.