Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
According to assertion made here i totally disagree to it. The assertion states that the people who obtain higher positions should step down after couple of years leads to mismanagement from the place they step down from. It can create a havoc in the system . By changing of personnel at a high position so casually can create a confusion all around the system and their will be no respect for that position.
Right now multiple places specially in government their is this policy that government should be changed after every 5 years but if a system which is just settled changed again after five year can't keep the promise it made and public might not have the respect for the government . The citizen's might think that "there will be a new one coming so why should we bother", this may disrupt the whole progress made by the old personnel by the new one coming. And their might be lots of time consumed by the new authority to understand the system developed by the old authorities.
The reason which guarantees the path of success for any enterprise by changing the main authority time doesn’t seem to reliable . It may be partially true but doesn't guarantees that the firm or government will succeed 100% . Just for example in India the prime minister Mr. Narendra modi has just stepped in and trying to make a huge effort to change the India , but if a enthusiastic and a brainy person is to be stepped down after five years can be a big loss actually.
The person who has spent his sweat and blood after a business , government or institutes has to give up a position after short time of period can be harmful to that individuals , And the pressure on them increases to that much point that may lead the whole thing to a dead end . Their is a famous saying -"Every coin has two side" , There might be some positive outcome of changing the authorities time to time but in the list of pros and cons , cons wins with the flying colors.
In sum the changing of authorities has possible outcomes but i would like to adhere to my word and like to disagree the statement and a reason with out proper analysis . Because if the authority changes from time to time people might not want to take that position a all . So the path of success will be miles away with out the personnel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, so, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.9520958084 154% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 55.5748502994 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 412.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59951456311 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55216033654 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492718446602 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6174242386 57.8364921388 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 119.503703932 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4666666667 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.25449101796 533% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163119142103 0.218282227539 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552863284151 0.0743258471296 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578235590676 0.0701772020484 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939376769341 0.128457276422 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055933089829 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.3550499002 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.5979740519 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.