Some people think that being able to communicate with others online is breaking down the geographical barriers and enabling people who would normally never have the chance to meet, to communicate.
What are the advantages of international communication online?
Are there any disadvantages to this?
Media transportation is believed to have shorten the distance and gives people chances to make friends with people who couldn't be met in the past. In my judgement, modern tool of communication has brought people closer to each others than ever before.
For starters, as a matter of fact, in this period of integration, the role of online communication cannot be ruled out. One point in favour of this is having made the work from this continent to others much more convenient. This has opened so many opportunities for people from all over the world to introduce their products, tradition and worship to oversea friends. Additionally, human are able to work and go on business with many companies at different corners of earth.
Secondly, the other focus point of modernization is advanced the living standards. Media tools not only increase the understanding among countries but also widen our knowledge from different sources. The developing places can approach many advance equipment and experiment from the developed ones so that people can catch up with the speed of life easier.
On the contrary, besides, if people cannot fend off from many criminal in virtual world, they are prone to put themselves in jeopardy. Bear in mind that there are a myriad of people day by day trying to lead the teenager, people into the illegal way to take advantages over. Especially who cannot overcome the emotion, belief and think straight in the social life.
In conclusion, international communication online has contribute to the succeed of the world today from making the cross-country work easier and give people chances to keep up with the world outside. However, unconcern at the disadvantages of it can put human in danger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'shortened'.
Suggestion: shortened
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...chances to make friends with people who couldnt be met in the past. In my judgement, mo...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much advance equipment', 'a good deal of advance equipment'.
Suggestion: much advance equipment; a good deal of advance equipment
...ces. The developing places can approach many advance equipment and experiment from the developed ones ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...pment and experiment from the developed ones so that people can catch up with the sp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rary, besides, if people cannot fend off from many criminal in virtual world, the...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...jeopardy. Bear in mind that there are a myriad of people day by day trying to lead the...
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... of people day by day trying to lead the teenager, people into the illegal way to...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08771929825 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84248210627 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.800261323 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24991283832 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781939390497 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620020798869 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141149573671 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680587850698 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.