Essay topics:
Which kind of accomodation would you like to live in?
I would like to live in an apartment. There are some advantages of having an independent life. First of all, I want to do house work such as making bed, cleaning and cooking by myself because these things make my house more clean and beautiful. I do not like noise and I want to be quiet and alone. The second advantages is, I fell freedom and I can do everything I like without effecting other people. I have a large space with living room, bath room and kitchen. It makes me comfortable and confident when my friends come to my house and join my party. However, there is one disadvantage of living alone.For example, when I’m under the weather , I do not have anyone to take care of me.
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...The second advantages is, I fell freedom and I can do everything I like without e...
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...h living room, bath room and kitchen. It makes me comfortable and confident when ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 566.0 1615.20841683 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 129.0 315.596192385 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38759689922 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51626660613 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68992248062 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 506.74238477 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.618122365 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.75 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122507298445 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735818071263 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10653840066 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122507298445 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 78.4519038076 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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