You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
say what the problem is
describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing in concern with an accommodation issue.
While I have a very bright and cosy room which satisfies my needs, there is one drawback which is bothering me a lot. Unfortunately the shower in the block where I live does not work appropriately. It seems that this is a big inconvenience to me because I have gotten used to jogging in the morning and therefore it is necessary for me to have a working shower.
I understand that it is not your fault the shower does not work but when I arranged my accommodation with you, I thought that I mentioned that I needed a room with all conveniences, and this in my opinion, includes a working shower.
I would be really happy if you could suggest some ways to resolve this problem, for example by moving me to another block or promising to fix the shower quickly.
I appreciate your attention and am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as it possible.
Yours sincerely,
Golota Dmytro
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...promising to fix the shower quickly. I appreciate your attention and am lookin...
^
Line 11, column 33, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...kly. I appreciate your attention and am looking forward to hearing from you as ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8439857108 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9416382826 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 4.34317383033 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11206102998 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497119912444 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410253608596 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064620019247 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354475335476 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.