International travel makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?
Today, it is true that hordes visitors coming abroad have a prejudice judgement about that country. There are several reasons of their dissatisfaction and simple solutions of this trend.
One of the key factors is people's religious bigot. They have put forward only their traditions and belief what is sarrowful. For example, the bulk of travellers make their judgement based on own knowledge and go against to local people. Another issue is that their interest are so parochial. It is not desirable to them to gain habits or customs from another nationalities. Moreover, people appreciate their religious but it is abnormally to strange others perspectives. At last but not least, tourists have an old stereotypes in the world-view. In excess of recent years, tourism had been changed significantly and their background do not allow to feel organization of tourism industry of country for instance, Turkish.
To begin, for preventing proconception of tradition government should attempt to educate population especially young children. For example, in school schedule there should be subjects related go into others culture and make positive tone to sufficient respect others. Furthermore, had better to arrange international festival and events that would be in unity. For instance, in my country festival namely "Sharq taronalari" aimed to indicate our interest and greeting in front of other countries.
To conclude, it is vital to get rid of any religious or national differences and being more tolerant and inquisitive have a great influence for further decelopment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'feeling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: feeling
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47346938776 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10273891178 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661224489796 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8307842255 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865663217985 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274416769512 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282289173608 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427307856593 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177170971838 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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