Topic: More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is commonly believed that there is a trend in owning a famous brand names with clothes, cars and other items. It is understandable that people tend to purchasing top ranked labels due to the high quality of products that are provided to consumers. From my perspective, i do not agree with the idea of owning expensive items eventhough it may be warranted.
On the one hand, there are many reasons can be given to explain the rapid increasing in the number of clients using luxury products. People usually purchase high ranked products because these items often have the luxurious and come along ...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ided to consumers. From my perspective, i do not agree with the idea of owning ex...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'being'.
Suggestion: being often
...h quaity products, such as Rolex Watch, often being crafted by professional craftsmen, whic...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
...rend. Besides from the high quality the products given, some people purchase these brand...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Nam) must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...f young middle class people in Viet Nam spend a great deal of money into latest smart...
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Line 5, column 696, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , resulting
... aware of our currently financial status,resulting in the fact that people's belongin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, may, moreover, really, so, still, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10240963855 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71252959604 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3603158889 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.307692308 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152534075208 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553032575354 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066855556661 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938939937263 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590889022068 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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