Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is true that recognition of good leadership is indeed the result of demands of an exacting situation. But the statement that leaders are created by the demands placed on them can only be held true when properly qualified. Different circumstances affect plausiblity of satement variedly. Futher discussion shall elaborate the grounds for taking conditional true position.
To begin with, if India finds Gandhi as a paragon of leaders, then it is for a reason. He was not born a leader, instead he belonged to a trader's family, but demands of the people and circumstances forged him into an apotheosis of leaders. The incident when he first fell victim to the apartheid exercised by the Britishers, exacted him to either forebear with the situation or take a stand and lead the sequestered races to equality. Thus it can be seen that normal people incept as leaders when demands are placed on them.
When we consider different situations than that of revolution but the likes of military, one can always find that military personal are well acquitted with the knowledge of demands that can be placed on them. We all know that the soldiers are commanded to lead into regions of warfare where chances of returning in one piece are low. The leaders here are those who are commanders in field of a group of marines or soldiers. Any instance when a leader of these teams deny to carry out the orders are later court-marshaled. And those who comply with the demands of their superiors in such difficult situation receive accolades.
In addition, taking the political leaders in the consideration, the example of Prime Minister of India is a cliche, during the implementation of demonetization, the step taken to eradicate spurious currency, people, banks and situation demanded a dynamic leadership. Every day a new policy or government rule was formed to cope up with the situation's demands. If the leaders would have failed to met these demands, the country with a fastest growth would have paralized its economy.
However, one cannot always assert that demands beget leaders. Instead several examples like Pyoungyang of North Korea exemplify that leadership many times might be bestowed upon select fews. And those leaders have no talent to be worthy of the position.
Conclusively, it stands true that leaders are indeed fabricated by the demands that are placed on them, but generalizing this term might not prove to be fruitful because several instances exist when oppsite has been proven.
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- ARGUMENT:A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood. Moreover, the majo 41
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'traders'' or 'trader's'?
Suggestion: traders'; trader's
...born a leader, instead he belonged to a traders family, but demands of the people and c...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ebear with the situation or take a stand and lead the sequestered races to equali...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...lead the sequestered races to equality. Thus it can be seen that normal people incep...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ece are low. The leaders here are those who are commanders in field of a group of marin...
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Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny carrying'.
Suggestion: deny carrying
...y instance when a leader of these teams deny to carry out the orders are later court-marshale...
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Line 7, column 376, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had failed'?
Suggestion: had failed
... the situations demands. If the leaders would have failed to met these demands, the country with ...
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Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... to met these demands, the country with a fastest growth would have paralized its...
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Line 9, column 63, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ways assert that demands beget leaders. Instead several examples like Pyoungyang of Nor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, thus, well, as for, in addition, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06779661017 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80256067462 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556900726392 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8858434668 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.65 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.65 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162414721776 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509251870868 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399624221904 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858623634523 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351727938791 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.