People prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced ones. Why do you think this happens? Should the government support local film makers financially?
Nowadays films are released globally and viewers get an opportunity to see the foreign films in addition to local ones. In some countries, it has also been observed that people like to watch the foreign produced films than the native cinema. I shall explain the reason for this.
People who give preference to foreign cinema have some valid points. Firstly, in some of the countries, local cinema is not popular and only few films are produced yearly, which perhaps not enough to meet viewers demands. For example, in Arab countries, producing films are not considered good and people refrain from making film. Secondly, poor quality of films diverts the people towards foreign films. Sometimes films produced locally do not meet the required standards and not able to attract the local people. Particularly, films produced by African countries do not even meet the basic qualities. As a result, local people are forced to watch other nation’s films. Finally, films which are produced in developed countries are highly animated and provide altogether different experience.
Cinema has become an integral part of the culture and even some the countries are known because of their cinema industry. Countries see it as a chance to tell their local stories and exhibit their culture. Moreover, cinema has emerged as a new industry and not only entertain the people but also generate employment for millions of people depending on the size of the industry. For instance, Government of India has waived of entertainment taxes for locally produced films in order to motivate the local producers and generate local employment.
To sum up, Quality of films, interesting stories and use of technology in the foreign film attracts the people to watch the films produced in other countries. I also hold the view that government should provide adequate financial support to local cinema industries for promoting native art & culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ema have some valid points. Firstly, in some of the countries, local cinema is not popular ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24516129032 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61614641041 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506451612903 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2351547251 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6470588235 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430383092631 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146113045476 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778697879556 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287532676276 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679865870678 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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