Corporal punishment has been practiced in family for a long time. Nowadays many people strongly oppose it. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Punishment to children is very common, particularly physical punishment is exercised often when children misbehave or do things wrong and this type of punishment has been existing in society for decades. Nevertheless, sections of people are against this physical punishment awarded to children. I shall explain both side of arguments and give me opinion.
People who believe that corporal punishment is effective have some rational points. First of all, children do not differentiate the severity of warnings & mistake and consider every mistake as small and ignorable. As a result, they do not think about the repercussion and continue to make mistakes. For example, my nephew who was violent and involved in altercation at school which was initially given warnings and finally end up loss of his own ear wall in big fight among school children. Secondly, children are forgetful if things are not made in hard manner. It has been seen many times that children overlook the notices issues to them but remember the hard physical punishment at school and home.
However, effectiveness of corporal punishments has always been questioned and in recent, educationists openly also about the downside of physical punishments. There is very thin line between right corporal punish and physical abuse. Generally, parents or teacher start with punishments and that’s end up in abuses and resulting injuries to ward. For instance, my neighbor punished his daughter by hitting on head and that caused severe injuries to her head. In addition, some children who are not able to bear such trauma for longer period go through depression or metal ill-ness.
To recapitulate, though corporal punishments seem to be working in most of the families, there are severe side effects of physical treatment. In my view, corporal punishments should be exercised in rare circumstances and children should be counselled by parents for mistakes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33881578947 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90474040089 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6201920232 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205541122074 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713364089946 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535595310833 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132066187886 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380631406055 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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