The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Agree or disagree.
In modern era, the fast-pace of development is bringing comfort and luxurious in life, but it also has some undesirable effect. Since the vigorous work and study load, people have less time to relax. The different people have the variety of ways to reduce the stress and take the rest. Some people spend their time alone and feel relaxing. While other people spend their time with friends and family to reduce stress and chill out. I disagree to that statement that the best way for reducing stress and relax is spending time alone because of following reasons.
To begin with, the person spending time with family or close one's is better than time spend alone because of the a person has chance that sharing the problem and exchange life events with them. This kind ways, he feel relax and reduce his tension. For an example, five years ago, when my board exam finish I worried about my result and also depressed but when I talk to my father. I feel relax and abate my stress.
Furthermore, the person spend time with friends is best ways to feel relax and easily forget the stress. For an instance, one year ago, hectic work of the office I have too much stressed therefore I decide to travel Goa with friend. After, I went Goa with my friends. On that trip I really enjoyed trip and forgive the work stress.
Moreover, spending time alone is feel more boring and lonely, therefore is better to spending time with family and friends. The presence of loving one's a person not feels stress. For an instance, during the college time I mostly spend my whole vacation with my family and friends. It is easy ways to relaxing and decreases the tensions.
In conclusion, contemplating aforementioned reasons, the spend time with family and friends help to not only relax and reduce the stress but it also helps the forgive the whole tension and not feel the loneliness. That's why I disagree the spend time alone is help to person is feel relax and reduce the stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the; a
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...ore I decide to travel Goa with friend. After, I went Goa with my friends. On that tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65229885057 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26015383314 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445402298851 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4471021244 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.95 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345915677847 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138216364831 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105772568603 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23311530536 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657127753144 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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